So-So
The second installment in the Hellhound series had many of the same errors the first was plagued with; missing words, jumbled sentences, leaps in thought trains, too damn many 'as' as this, as that, as I, as he....I get it, a lot of stuff is happening at once. Overusing 'as' doesn't make the story sound fast paced, it makes the story teller sound redundant... But, hey, I pretty much knew what I was getting into when I bought the 2nd book, right? So why the harsh rating?
Well...it wasn't the book that hurt it's score. It was the sneak peek at the 3rd book that pissed me off. HUGE PLOT HOLE! Damn, I hate plot holes, and this one is a constant throughout the 3rd book...I'll write that review soon...Spoiler alert, it's less than one star...
