The Good and Bad of Hellhound #1
Honestly loved the book!
What I loved:
The risky sexiness of it all.
The world building.
The fast pace
What I totally hated:
The constant errors and typos. There were a lot of missing words, mixed up sentences, missing commas. I was counting them at first, but I lost count...
The repetitive phrasing was annoying as all get out. Really just the 'as.' as, as, as, as, as this, as that, as I, as he, as she...You get the picture.
And it was far too short. I could totally point out areas that needed more explaining, whole chapters that would have done the book a world of good.
Also, there was a lot of telling, rather than showing, which makes it feel kind of lazy
BUT, like I said, I honestly loved the book. For all the things I griped about, I read it in a damn day. I would have done it in one sitting, but life...LOL It's totally worth a read, and I will be reading the next one. ^_^
Hey, if there are less typos in the next installment, I totally see a five star rating in its future.
